I need to make some updates to my first draft. It was rather decent, but there is definite room for improvement. During the next two weeks, I need to work on my word count and perfecting citations and my use of them. Specifically, I need to add a couple more hundred words that would put me over the six page mark. I am currently only a little over 5 pages. Since I need to incorporate a book into my paper, I can easily add a book, and the supporting information that comes with it, to reach the goal of 1500 words. The book will also complete my list of sources to a perfect nine for nine. Once that is done, I must make sure I add all in-text citations and clean up my works cited page. If all that is done, I can expect a very good grade.
